It was a dark night and all you could hear was the sound of a crow. Spookily, the crow was swooping around the galaxy sky.
High in the sky the moon was a light vivid white, it was the only bit of light around the forbidden temple.
I ran up the broken stairs, I had to get to the temple before the crow did. There was a key in a chest up there I had to get so I could destroy it because if the crow did he would unlock the key, and it would change the world. Time was running out! I only have a matter of minutes before the crow gets it. Suddenly, I saw the crow flying up there, he was much faster than me. I ran up the broken stairs as fast as I could but the crow had it in his beak. I grabbed a rock from the ground and I tried to hit him but my throw wasn’t even close to hitting him. Quickly, the crow flew away but I would not let him go. I chased him through the woods. Then I lost him. I climbed up a tree to see where he went. I saw him on the top of a massive tree. The crow suddenly saw me and he flew away.
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Kia ora Teddy. I like the way you built the suspense in your story. I'm now wondering what will happen next... When you say you only copied some of it, do you mean you were given the start of the story? If so maybe you could make that part a different colour or size?
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Talofa lava Teddy Wow this is great my favorite part was the light vivid white part maybe next time you could say what you story is about and explain the setting . This is great Keep up the good work BlOg yA lAtEr.
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