Hello bloggers I have made a 100 word story.
Hope u like it!
Once upon a time a boy named Andy, who always wanted to fly a rocket ship,
was walking in the city with his mum at around 4:00 in the afternoon.
While they were walking Andy was running along the street as he zoomed
past a rocket ship thing that you could jump in, as Andy ran back to see what
it was, Andy noticed that it needed a coin to get it moving.
So he searched his pockets and Andy found a coin, he quickly put it in.
Andy jumped in, fell over, climbed back up and he was ready to blast off!!
Andy clicked the button and it started moving though
it was just rocking really slowly side to side.
Andy was very disappointed. Andy threw his space helmet on the ground
with anger
. As Andy started to cry he saw a sign saying lemonade that gave Andy an idea.
He ran home, got some wood and a hammer and a few nails. He was going to
make a lemonade stand.
He finally made it because lots
of customers were coming.
Many, many, many, many, many, years later he had a full bag of coins.
He went back to the rocket ship thing.
He put all his money which was $1,000,000,000.
He jumped in again and he blasted off into space.
THE END
Have u ever done a 100 word story before?
Blog u later
I hoped you enjoyed writing this story Teddy, I like the repetition of the word many...I wonder how many years each ''many'' represents-perhaps a decade?
ReplyDeleteRemember to check your sentence beginnings to keep your writing interesting (3 He- in a row) You could use his name as a starting word for one sentence and perhaps an adverb eg Rapidly jumping....!