Hello bloggers today I made some amazing writing I think.
I was walking in an old forest, suddenly
I saw a huge black house.
There were glowing red windows.
There were lots of big black crows flying
around in dark night.
All you could here was crows,
it sounded like they all under attack.
The house looked like a castle.
I stepped closer, then I heard a
loud scream it sounded like this “aaaaahhhh”
I ran as fast as I could it felt like I was running a
marathon.
Blog you later!
Hello Teddy I'm Sariya! I loved your spooky story it was short but cool! I I'm working on my own of that.
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-Sariya
Hello Teddy I'm Byesion. your small story was truly breathtaking. Though have you tried using spell check because I noticed you spelt hear as here. It was still an awesome story to read. Have you tried using the Thesaurus for this? Bye!
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ReplyDeleteI'm Bhargavi. Your story was really nice. Did you used Thesaurus or come up with the words yourself?